Before:
This image shows the original image I was given. It is busy, disorganized, and seems haphazard. While looking at this design the eye is jumping around and not truly focusing on any one area. It sends a messy message and possibly confuses the viewer.
After:
This image I have created from the same shapes by simply resizing, adjusting colors, and changing their locations. I chose three colors that were all visually appealing together but were different enough that they created a bit of contrast to show several parts of the same design. The alignment and proximity create the idea that they all together form one image, as does the repetition in color, size, and shape. The final product is a well organized structured design with clear boundaries and allows the eyes to focus on the design without constantly moving.

The design of this poster is clearly inadequate. Other than the information being missing there are no lines for the eyes to follow. There are also two literal lines that run through the middle of the poster which seem to cross off some information. Other than the image there is only one color, font, and text size which does not allow for anything to stand out or to attract a viewer to the design.
After:

As you can see through these two pairs of images, taking the ideas from the acronym CARP can make a world of difference and make viewers see similar designs in much easier and useful ways. If time is taken to design complete images they can be effective and convey purposeful messages.
Kevin:
ReplyDeleteI like your shape slide. It's fun and interesting. It took me a minute to see that the top middle was a combination of colors from the bottom three. It was like a puzzle, interesting and intriguing at the same time.
I also really like your poster design. Great use of white space, balance, and alignment. I like your color choices and font type. My eyes naturally start with the title and work their way down the information.
I like your poster design- I might have made things a little bigger to take up some of the white space, though. A background color might have helped it seem more complete, too. Your slogans are very clever and I wanted to learn more.
ReplyDeleteI think your shape slide shows a very good use of color and location. You did a good job of using the available shapes and turning them into something completely different while still maintaining the shapes you were given to work with for the assignment.
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